Nice work leaving a thoughtful comment on Koshik's blog post. I see you've engaged with Koshik's post about the polluted rivers. Maybe you could ask him a question to start a conversation? For your hard work, I can reward you with 2 bonus points. However, I see you have been commenting on lots of students pages! Mix things up and get creative in the way you engage with them. Questions are a great way to keep the conversation flowing.
Nice work completing another Summer Learning Journey activity. For this activity you were asked to research two rivers in New Zealand that are effected by pollution. I see you have chosen the Samo River in Europe, and the Yellow River in China. This is great! Do you know where in Europe the Samo River is found? I like how you have included rules that are in place for tourists and locals to stop the littering in the rivers. The Yellow River is very interesting, I hope it is naturally the colour of yellow and not because of all the pollution. What is it about these two rivers that made you choose them?
Thanks for including an image of each river, be sure to attribute where you find the images from. That means that we have to give credit to this image. We can give credit to an image by giving it a correct name (for example: Image of Tāne Mahuta) and saying where it came from (for example: Department of Conservation)
I look forward to reading more of your cool blog posts.
Hi Koshik
ReplyDeleteI really like how you put a picture and wrote it number like 1. then 2. and I thought it pretty cool
Next time you could decorate it by coloring the letters and you could tell us what are they doing to stop it from polluting
This reminded me of this river near by it is not polluted it has ducks in it and when ever I walk past I always look inside it from the bars
Looking forward to your posts
Mehakpreet :)
Hey Mehakpreet,
DeleteNice work leaving a thoughtful comment on Koshik's blog post. I see you've engaged with Koshik's post about the polluted rivers. Maybe you could ask him a question to start a conversation? For your hard work, I can reward you with 2 bonus points. However, I see you have been commenting on lots of students pages! Mix things up and get creative in the way you engage with them. Questions are a great way to keep the conversation flowing.
Thanks,
Jordan
Kia Ora Koshik,
ReplyDeleteNice work completing another Summer Learning Journey activity. For this activity you were asked to research two rivers in New Zealand that are effected by pollution. I see you have chosen the Samo River in Europe, and the Yellow River in China. This is great!
Do you know where in Europe the Samo River is found? I like how you have included rules that are in place for tourists and locals to stop the littering in the rivers. The Yellow River is very interesting, I hope it is naturally the colour of yellow and not because of all the pollution. What is it about these two rivers that made you choose them?
Thanks for including an image of each river, be sure to attribute where you find the images from. That means that we have to give credit to this image. We can give credit to an image by giving it a correct name (for example: Image of Tāne Mahuta) and saying where it came from (for example: Department of Conservation)
I look forward to reading more of your cool blog posts.
Thanks,
Jordan