Nice job completing this Summer Learning Journey activity, 'Let It Rain'. What a long story you've written for us, well done. From reading your story I can sense the paranoia you were experiencing when each time you checked on the weather outside and the rain never stopped. It wasn't until you managed to get some sleep and then became distracted by the TV that the rain went away. You're right, it was best to stay inside because the rain can be dangerous for humans. How long did this acid rain storm last in your story? Woah, in your story you have cameras in your basement. That is pretty cool, what would you normally use the cameras for?
Do you think if this were real life, you would still do the same things as you did in your story? I look forward to reading your response.
Kia Ora Koshik,
ReplyDeleteNice job completing this Summer Learning Journey activity, 'Let It Rain'.
What a long story you've written for us, well done. From reading your story I can sense the paranoia you were experiencing when each time you checked on the weather outside and the rain never stopped. It wasn't until you managed to get some sleep and then became distracted by the TV that the rain went away. You're right, it was best to stay inside because the rain can be dangerous for humans. How long did this acid rain storm last in your story? Woah, in your story you have cameras in your basement. That is pretty cool, what would you normally use the cameras for?
Do you think if this were real life, you would still do the same things as you did in your story?
I look forward to reading your response.
Thanks,
Jordan