I really like that cool picture of the school you have their it looks just like a school and I like how you want to make schools longer and not just say I want the schools to be for one hour long and thats it you actually detailed it a lot.
Next time you could maybe give more information about why you want school to be longer and why you want to spend time with your friends is it because you want to have fun. Apart from that it's amazing.
I'm sure Prime Minister Jacinda Arden would be interested in your suggestion about a longer school day. What made you choose this topic? I think it's a good point - you could also do extra learning.
Hey Koshik,
ReplyDeleteI really like that cool picture of the school you have their it looks just like a school and I like how you want to make schools longer and not just say I want the schools to be for one hour long and thats it you actually detailed it a lot.
Next time you could maybe give more information about why you want school to be longer and why you want to spend time with your friends is it because you want to have fun. Apart from that it's amazing.
Keep up the good work
By Mehakpreet
Kia ora Koshik,
ReplyDeleteI'm sure Prime Minister Jacinda Arden would be interested in your suggestion about a longer school day. What made you choose this topic? I think it's a good point - you could also do extra learning.
Nga mihi
Erica