I'm Daniel a blog commenter for the Kootuitui school in the Summer learning Journey. I'm really exited to see the things you've posted and it's great to see you've gotten through lots of the activities.
Your motorcycle drawing is really good, I draw in my spare time and can draw lot of things well but have not practised doing cars or motorcycles, this is way better than I could do at the moment. I like how you have only put "1. Me" for who can use the bike, it made me laugh when I read it.
Keep up the great posts and I'll see you in the comments.
I really like your creative drawing it looks super cool and how you have added lots of detail to the drawing by adding some shading in the tires it looks super cool. I also like how you have listed four things about the features and your only gonna use it that also made me laugh. I wonder if anyone else would use I will be to scared to drive it so I think your correct.
Next time you could add some more information about you motorcycle like where would you drive it to or how do you use your motor cycle and what colours it could come in. I would love to know more about your motor cycle.
This reminded me of my vehicle it's a bit similar but I made a bike cycle and a motorbike combined together but it ended up looking more like a bike cycle rather than a motor bike but I was okay with that what about is this custom vehicle or a normal vehicle.
Hey Koshik,
ReplyDeleteI'm Daniel a blog commenter for the Kootuitui school in the Summer learning Journey. I'm really exited to see the things you've posted and it's great to see you've gotten through lots of the activities.
Your motorcycle drawing is really good, I draw in my spare time and can draw lot of things well but have not practised doing cars or motorcycles, this is way better than I could do at the moment. I like how you have only put "1. Me" for who can use the bike, it made me laugh when I read it.
Keep up the great posts and I'll see you in the comments.
Daniel :)
Hi Koshik
ReplyDeleteI really like your creative drawing it looks super cool and how you have added lots of detail to the drawing by adding some shading in the tires it looks super cool. I also like how you have listed four things about the features and your only gonna use it that also made me laugh. I wonder if anyone else would use I will be to scared to drive it so I think your correct.
Next time you could add some more information about you motorcycle like where would you drive it to or how do you use your motor cycle and what colours it could come in. I would love to know more about your motor cycle.
This reminded me of my vehicle it's a bit similar but I made a bike cycle and a motorbike combined together but it ended up looking more like a bike cycle rather than a motor bike but I was okay with that what about is this custom vehicle or a normal vehicle.
Keep up the amazing work
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