You've gotten some key parts of the story down and it's great to see you have done the research and understood it and used your own words to describe the story of AJ Hackett. I was a little confused at first though because you never mentioned the word 'Bungee jumping' or explained that AJ and his friend had invented it. I'd like to encourage you to have another read of the research and add a few more key details to your post.
https://www.bungy.co.nz/about-us/
You've made a great start. See you in the comments
Hey Koshik,
ReplyDeleteYou've gotten some key parts of the story down and it's great to see you have done the research and understood it and used your own words to describe the story of AJ Hackett. I was a little confused at first though because you never mentioned the word 'Bungee jumping' or explained that AJ and his friend had invented it. I'd like to encourage you to have another read of the research and add a few more key details to your post.
https://www.bungy.co.nz/about-us/
You've made a great start. See you in the comments
Daniel :)